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Ladies of Motorcity

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I did this for the contest over at the peopleofmotorcity tumblr. I haven't been in a contest in ages! It was really just an excuse to draw these three awesome babes.

I experimented a bit here, trying out different colors and angles and trying to create a dynamic picture so I guess this was good practice. Did I fail? Probably xD But I need to get out of my comfort zones.

Comments are always appreciated. I'd like to know what worked or what didn't work. I feel too stagnant with my skills lately.

Cross posted to my tumblr: [link]
Art (c) Me
Motorcity (c) Titmouse
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Awwwwwwwman, this is great! I love the varied poses and, as always, your amazing amazing faces. xD

I actually didn't notice the angle change until you mentioned it. I see now the slight size difference between them, but yeah, I think it's just a bit too subtle to have worked. Also, the characters' limbs are still kind of... flat/parallel for the most part? which adds to the kind of straight-on look. (For example, maybe it would've helped to move the far-left character's leg forward, pointing more at us than parallel to the face of the image). I also would like to see you push the shadows a lot more, as they're fairly fuzzily-defined behind the characters, and the shading on them is nice, but very soft. More contrast -> more dynamicism?? maybe. xD
I still can't really pin down exactly what DOESN'T work here, because it's still a really lovely picture, it just feels a little too subtle? Just keep trying to push that perspective, I'm sure you'll get it!! C: